From our feedback given me from our peer group me, Bronte and Jazmine gained some constructive criticism and came to the conclusion of what we need to do to help improve the sequence, these include; Re-shooting some scenes, making sure the camera is not shaky, Making sure the pictures are already on the page rather than them just popping up whilst making sure they are shown quicker, cut some shots and re shoot using cut shots to help get a fast paste to the title sequence.
Title Sequence idea
Our title sequence idea is to create a yearbook which is opened by all the conventional characters that are seen in teen comedy dramas, for example 'the jock', 'the elite', 'the freak' and 'the nerds'. The title sequence will show all of these characters opening the yearbook and showing the audience their school photos whilst also showing pages such as prom day and graduation day. When creating the title sequence we need to make sure that it is very conventional, this is so it looks as realistic as possible, without the right costume and props the title sequence will not be as effective. When creating the sequence it is crucial for us to add in bright bold colours throughout the yearbook so the audience are aware that it is a high school film.